初中英语作文题目及范文解读
1.作为一名中学生,学会自我保护是一项基本技能.你们班级为此召开了Learn to protect ourselves 的主题班会,请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的倡议书,号召全体同学注意自身安全,加强自我保护意识. 内容:1.不带管制刀具到学校; 2.不单独会见网友; 3.不打架;
4.上学、放学途中遵守交通规则,注意安全
5.遇到紧急情况,首先报警或者报告老师,向其求助.
参考词汇:管制刀具:restricted knives or things; 网友net friend; 紧急情况 emergency. 要求:1.用词恰当,要点全面,层次清晰,书写规范. 2.可适当发挥,80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数. Learn to protect ourselves Boys and girls,
As we all know,safety is very important.So,we should pay much attention to safety in our daily lives. . 【分析】【高分句型一】
①Furthermore,②if we meet some emergency,we must call for help from the police or our teachers.
①furthermore此外,引出下文.
②if引导的条件状语从句,主句含有情态动词must,从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时. 【高分句型二】
①In a word,②following these safety rules above can ③make us live in peace. ①in a word总之,总述以上内容.
②following these safety rules above 动名词短语做主语,谓语动词要用单数. ③make sb do sth让某人做某事,make的用法. 【解答】Boys and girls,
As we all know,safety is very important.So,we should pay much attention to safety in our daily lives.
Firstly,we mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems.(不带管制刀具到学校)Secondly,we should not meet net friends alone without our parents' permission.(不单独会见网友)Thirdly,we should be friendly to others.Do not fight with each other.(不打架;)Fourthly,make sure that we always obey the traffic rules on our way to school or home.Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves (上学、放学途中遵守交通规则,注意安全)Furthermore,if we meet some emergency,we must call for help from the police or our teachers.(遇紧急情况,立即报告)【高分句型一】
In a word,following these safety rules above can make us live in peace【高分句型二】
【点评】初中英语的作文,着重考查学生连词成句的能力,要在\"准\"字上下功夫.在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面.在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式.对于中学作文的写作,尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中,写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章,不要出现中式英文.在平时的练习中,注意多背诵范文,对于写的好的句子进行默写,考试时就能写出准确地道的作文.
2.你的睡眠习惯是怎样的?是早睡早起的morning people, 还是晚睡晚起的evening people?请以\"A Morning or Evening People?\"为题,根据所给表格提示,写一篇短文,谈谈你对养成良好睡眠习惯,保持身体健康的认识.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名,词数不得少于80个词.
A Morning or Evening People? 写作提示
Beginning Body Part
提示词
your sleeping habit different ideas
sleeping habits
your parents' sleeping habits; go to bed; get up; sleeping
hours reasons
enough sleep; healthy body
Ending
______________________. 【分析】【高分句型一】
They say there's not much sleep for them at their ages.
他们说在他们这个年纪没有多少睡眠.They say后使用了宾语从句,宾语从句用了there be句型. 【高分句型二】
Many studies show that it's much healthier to go to bed early and get up early.
许多研究表明,早睡早睡更健康.Many studies show 后使用了宾语从句,宾语从句使用的句型是It is +adj.+to do sth. 【解答】
A Morning or Evening People?
Different people have different sleeping habits. Some are morning people, some are evening people.(不同的人有不同的睡眠习惯)
My parents are morning people. They go to bed early and get up early. They say there's not much sleep for them at their ages.【高分句型一】As for me, I never stay up late. I often go to bed before 9:00 pm, and get up early for school the next morning.(我和父母亲都早睡早起)
I think everyone should have good sleeping habits. They can help our bodies relax and rest well. Many studies show that it's much healthier to go to bed early and get up early.【高分句型二】I prefer to be a healthy morning people.(好的睡眠习惯的好处)
【点评】首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,不要出现语法错误.最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误.
3.某英文杂志正在举办以\"My Favorite...\" 为主题的征文活动.请根据以下问题提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一件物品(如书籍、CD、玩具等). (1)How long have you had it? (2)How did you get it?
(3)Why do you like it?Why is it special? (4)Can you say anything more about it? 注意(1)词数80左右.
(2)文章必须包括四个问题的相关内容,也可适当增加信息.
My Favorite________
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think she is good at describing the magic world.我认为她擅长描述神奇的世界. I think+宾语从句;be good at擅长… 【高分句型二】
If you also like magic stories,do not miss it!如果你也喜欢魔法故事,不要错过它! if引导条件状语从句. 【解答】My Favorite Book
My favorite book is Harry Potter.I have had it for five years.(拥有多久了) It was a birthday gift from my mother.(如何得到的) She knew I really love such kind of stories.It was written by J.K.Rowling.I think she is good at describing the magic world.【高分句型一】It is about a boy called Harry and his adventures at Hogwarts.It shows us the importance of friendship and courage.I fell in love with the book as soon as I started reading it.(喜欢的原因及它的特别之处) If you also like magic stories,do not miss it!(推荐这本书)【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
4.假如你是张华,请对你的美国笔友Peter的邮件进行回复,词数:80左右.
To From
Hi Zhang Hua,
How are you? I hope you're fine and not too busy! I heard you've changed a lot as a Grade Nine student. How have you changed? What is your biggest change? You mentioned that you've made great progress in learning English. How did you do that? I am looking forward
Zhang Hua Peter
to your reply. Yours, Peter
. 【分析】高分句型一:
I'm very glad to receive your e﹣mail.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件.be glad to do sth表示高兴做某事,后面跟to引导的不定式短语. 高分句型二:
I'll ask my teacher for help if I have problems.
如果我有问题,我会向老师求助.if引导一个条件状语从句,主句用一般将来时,构成will+动词原形,从句用一般现在时. 【解答】Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your e﹣mail.【高分句型一】 I'm OK now. Surely, I have changed a lot as a Grade Nine student. My biggest change is that I'm much busier than before. (我的最大的改变)In the past, I had much free time to relax myself. I could watch TV after finishing homework on schooldays. On weekends, I could hang out with my parents.(过去的做法) But now, I hardly have any free time. I spend almost all my time studying. (现在的做法)So I have made great progress in my study, especially in learning English. I concentrate more on my study. I listen to my English teacher and take notes more carefully than before. I'll ask my teacher for help if I have problems.【高分句型二】(如何提高英语成绩) Though I'm busy now, I feel happy.(感受) Yours, Zhang Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
5.德国姐妹学校的几位学生下周要来杭州游学,老师交给你一张便条,让你给他们组长 Jackson写封e﹣mail.告知相关注意事项,并给出你认为恰当的理由. Things they need to take: 1.Umbrellas 2.Walking shoes Things they need to do:
1.Learn about the Chinese customs 2.Get information about Hangzhou
注意:
*应包括便条中的所有内容,可适当拓展;
*词数不少于80词, 开头已给出(不计入总词数). 【分析】【高分句型一】
You should wear walking shoes because we have to walk a lot.你应该穿步行鞋,因为我们要走很多路.
because引导原因状语从句. 【高分句型二】
We also need to get information about Hangzhou so that we can know what to do there.我们还需要了解杭州的情况,这样我们才能知道在那里做什么. so that引导目的状语从句. 【解答】Hi Jackson,
I'm glad that you are coming to Hangzhou next week. but I think there is still something I should let you and your friends know before you set off.(点题)You should wear walking shoes because we have to walk a lot. 【高分句型一】It rains a lot in Hangzhou at this time, so you should take an umbrella.(准备的东西)We need to learn more about the customs and culture of Hangzhou,especially what kids of our own age there are interested in.(高分句型二)We also need to get information about Hangzhou so that we can know what to do there.【高分句型二】(需要做什么)
We can't wait for you to arrive.We're really looking forward to your coming.(期待) wish you a pleasant trip! love Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
6.在今年4月23日第20个\"世界阅读日\"之际,我市进行了以\"爱上悦读\"为主题的阅读交流活动.请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文,分享你们学校的一些做法. 要点:
1.学校举行图书展,一年两次,向国学们介绍优秀文学作品; 2.各个班级设立图书角,同学们可以自由交换书籍; 3.每天下午通过广播进行15分钟的\"听书\"活动; 4.每学期每人至少阅读5本好书,并撰写一篇读书心得. 注意:
1.词数:80词左右,开头与结尾已写出,不计入总词数; 2.内容必须包括上述所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.参考词汇:literature;set up;exchange(v.交换);broadcast(n.广播);reading report
It's said that reading makes a full man.Here are some ways in our school to make reading more fun. .
Through these activities,we really love reading now.
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文.介绍学校在图书阅读交流方面的活动,时态以一般现在时为主;人称主要为第三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.其次考生可从四个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.学校举行图书展,一年两次,向国学们介绍优秀文学作品; 2.各个班级设立图书角,同学们可以自由交换书籍; 3.每天下午通过广播进行15分钟的\"听书\"活动; 4.每学期每人至少阅读5本好书,并撰写一篇读书心得. 重点短语: twice a year 每年两次
great literature works 优秀的文学作品 set up设立
exchange books 交换书籍 at least 至少 高分句型:
1.Book shows are held twice a year in our school. 我们学校每年举行两次图书展.
一般现在时的被动语态:主语+am/is/are+动词的过去分词;twice a year 一年两次 2.It helps us exchange some books with others freely there.它帮我们在那里自由交换书籍. help sb.do sth.帮助某人做某事
3.Each student must read at least five good books a term and write a reading report from what he/she has read.
每学期每人至少阅读5本好书,并从他读的内容当中撰写一篇读书心得.
这是一个由and连接的两个并列句;情态动词must\"必须\",后面跟动词原形;what he/she has read在句子中作宾语从句,意思是\"所读的内容\";write a reading report from what he/she has read从他读的内容当中撰写一篇读书心得 【解答】Reading activities in our school
It's said that reading makes a full man(高分句型).Here are some ways in our school to make reading more fun.Book shows are held twice a year in our school(高分句型).They can introduce some great literature works to us students.(举行图书展,介绍优秀文学作品)A book comer is set up in every classroom.It helps us exchange some books with others freely there(高分句型)(设立图书角,自由交换书籍).And at the same time,we have a 15 minutes' listening books by broadcast every afternoon.It brings us lots of fun indeed(\"听\"书活动).Our school also has a rule:each student must read at least five good books a term and write a reading report from what he/she has read(至少读五本书,写读书体会). Through these activities,we really love reading now. 【点评】提纲作文注意:
1.仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点.
2.提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,
按照一定逻辑关系来写.
3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯.
7.假定你是李平,美国交换生John想参加你校的艺术节活动。请根据他的邮件和你校地图进行回复,词数80左右。 Dear Li Ping, …
I've heard that there will be a report in your school art festival and I'm interested in it.However,I don't know your school very well.Could you please tell me how I can get to the Report Hall?When will the report start?What other activities can I take part in that day? Looking forward to your reply.
Love, John
Dear John,
_________.
Yours, Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
If you have artistic talent,you can show yourself in a talent show.如果你有艺术天赋,你可以在才艺表演中展示自己。if引导的条件状语从句 【高分句型二】
A trade meeting will be held in the afternoon.下午将举行贸易会议。被动语态 【解答】Dear John,
Let me tell you the way to the Report Hall.Turn left after you enter the school gate.Turn left again at the first corner.Go straight down this road until you reach the Science Building and turn left.You can see the Report Hall behind the Science Building.
The report will start at 9 a.m.on the day of the Art Festival.(时间) There will be other activities on that day. (怎么走)If you have artistic talent,you can show yourself in a talent show. 【高分句型一】A trade meeting will be held in the afternoon.【高分句型二】Maybe you can sell or buy something made by ourselves.You can go to the school office for more information about the festival.(还有哪些活动)
Yours, Li Ping
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
8.你校校报对全校800名学生喜欢阅读的图书类型做了一次调查,假如你是校报的小记者王丹,请根据邮件及表格提示,给校报的负责入John写一封回信。 注意:词数:80﹣100(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数) Dear Wang Dan,
We made a survey among 800 students in our school to find out what kind of books they like best.Now we need to write an article for the school newspaper about the findings.What are the results of the survey?What kind of books do they prefer( 更喜欢)?Why?Please reply as soon as possible. Yours, John
Kinds of books Cartoons Stories Science books
Dear John,
In the survey,________.
Yours, Wang Dan
Students 53% 31% 26%
Reasons(why) interesting… easy to read
…
【分析】【高分句型一】
They don't have to think too much when they watch them.他们看的时候不需要想太多。 when引导时间状语从句。 【高分句型二】
26% of the students like reading science books.26%的学生喜欢阅读科学书籍。 like doing sth喜欢做某事。 【解答】Dear John,
In the survey,They chose their favorite ones from cartoons,stories and science books.From the chart,the results can be shown.(点题)
53% of the students like to read cartoons best because they think cartoons are easy to understand.They don't have to think too much when they watch them. 【高分句型一】31% of the students say that stories are their favorites.Because there are many interesting experiences in these stories.26% of the students like reading science books. 【高分句型二】These books will help them open up an unknown world.(调查结果及原因)
Yours, Wang Dan 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
9.假设你是 Li Ming,请根据表格提供的学校拓展性课程信息,结合图中提供的个人爱好,写一篇英语小短文,简单介绍一下个人信息,学校的课程安排和你最喜欢的课程及其原因. 要求:
1.短文需要包含表格和图中所有信息,并作适当的想象和发挥. 2.注意不要出现个人与学校真是信息. 3.不少于 60 词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Name:Li Ming Age:13 Likes:science;soccer
Time
3:30 p.m.﹣4:30 p.m.Tuesday 3:30 p.m.﹣4:30 p.m.Friday
Subjects English songs
American history,3 D printing(打印)
Basketball,soccer,
art
I am Li Ming. I'm thirteen years old.I like science and soccer.I often play soccer with my friends after school.I like singing English songs because I like English best.I like history especially American history.We have English and history from 3:30 p.m.to 4:30 p.m.on Tuesday.We have basketball,soccer and art from 3:30 p.m.to 4:30 p.m.on Friday. . 【分析】【高分句型一】
I often play soccer with my friends after school.放学后我经常和我的朋友们一起踢足球. play with和…一起玩. 【高分句型二】
I like singing English songs because I like English best.我喜欢唱英语歌因为我最喜欢英语. like…best最喜欢…;because引导原因状语从句.
【解答】I am Li Ming.I'm thirteen years old. (姓名年龄)I like science and soccer.I often play soccer with my friends after school. 【高分句型一】I like singing English songs because I like English best. 【高分句型二】I like history especially American history. (爱好)We have English and history from 3:30 p.m.to 4:30 p.m.on Tuesday.We have basketball,soccer and art from 3:30 p.m.to 4:30 p.m.on Friday. (课程安排) 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
10.假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了,她为这次失败所困扰,无心学习.请你给她写一封电子邮件,建议她正确地看待达人秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果;提醒她实现理想的途径有很多,只有努力才能获得成功;鼓励她好好学习,也不放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天.
要求:(1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (2)字数:60﹣80词(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); (3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名.
【分析】高分句型:
①I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show.听说你在这次达人秀节目被淘汰了,我很难过.这里be sorry to do sth表示对做某事感到抱歉,
that后面跟的是一个宾语从句.
②I'd like to share with you my thoughts on this matter.我想和你分享一下我对此事的看法.句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事,后面跟to引导的不定式短语. 【解答】Dear Lisa,
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show(高分句型).I'd like to share with you my thoughts on this matter(高分句型).(引出话题) Yes,talent shows may change one's future.They offer the opportunity to show one's talents,and give people a way to make their dreams come true.Since only some people are truly talented,there is no need to take the result too seriously.It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight.So just enjoy the process.(介绍对达人秀节目的看法) In addition,there are many ways to success,and only by working hard can you achieve your goals.As a teenager,you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time,which,without doubt,will enrich your future life.(介绍实现理想的途径,只有努力才能获得成功)
Hope you'll be happy every day.(希望) Yours, Li Hua
【点评】对于作文题,首先应该充分了解题目的含义及要求.若给定的条件不足,可进行适当发挥;同时,平时还应该多注意关键句型、固定短语及高分句型的理解及记忆,做题时才能得心应手.
11.假如你是李明,以下是你学校的英语节安排表.此时你收到了外教老师Jenna给你的一封邮件,请根据她的邮件内容进行回复. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数.
English Day
Date January 15th
Time 9:00﹣11:30 14:00﹣15:30
Dear Li Ming,
It's so great to know that you are going to have an English Day in your school! I am really interested in that and I hope I can join you guys! Could you please tell me something about the time, the place and what we can do that day? And is there anything I can do to help you prepare for the big event? Write to me and let me know!
Yours, Jenna
Dear Jenna, I'm
so
glad
to
know
that
you
are
interested
in
our
English Yours,
Day. ___________________________.
Place The art theater Classroom 7 E
Activities English Talent Show English Corner
Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
If you come to our school, please call me.
如果你来我们学校,请给我打电话.if引导条件状语从句. 【高分句型二】
Looking forward to seeing you.
期待见到你.look forward to doing sth期待做某事. 【解答】Dear Jenna,
I'm so glad to know that you are interested in our English Day. I tell you some information about it.(点题) It will be held from on January 15th. It has two parts. One part is from 9:00 to 11:30, and it is at the art theater. There will be some English Talent shows there. The other part is between 14:00 and 15:30, and it is at Classroom 7 E. English Corner will take place. All of the teachers and students in our school will attend the big event.(具体介绍时间、地点和活动)
If you come to our school, please call me.【高分句型一】 I will meet you at the school gate.(相约地点)
Looking forward to seeing you.【高分句型二】 Yours, Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
12.根据中文和英文提示,用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 50 词的邮件.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
2020 年初,新型冠状病毒(COVID﹣19)肆虐全球,对人们的生活造成了很大的影响.在这个非常时期,我国全民齐心,抗击疫情,并取得了阶段性胜利.在新学期,学生们都采取网络学习的方式进行学习.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友 Peter 写 Email 询问你在疫情比较严重的那段时期的生活学习情况.请你用英语写一封回信,谈谈你在疫情最严重的那段时间做了什么,你那段时间的感受如何,并给他分享一些疫情生活学习方面的建议. 提示词: virus(病毒), fight against, keep fit, worried, hopeful, online lessons, mask (口罩), gathering(聚集)
提示问题:1. What did you do during those days? 2. How did you feel during those days? 3.What are your suggestions for Peter? Dear Peter,
The year 2020 is unusual to everyone. ____________________________________.
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Not only did I read classics, but also I had online courses given by my teachers.我不仅阅读经典名著,而且我还在线上老师教的课程.
not only…but also…不仅……而且……,not only至于句首,句子要倒装. 【高分句型二】
If you go out, you must wear protective masks to prevent yourself from getting infected.如果你外出,你必须戴上防护口罩,以防止感染. if引导条件状语从句. 【解答】Dear Peter,
The year 2020 is unusual to everyone. Since the novel coronavirus broke out in Wuhan in December, 2019, I have been staying at home and worried about the virus. On the one hand, I paid close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news or surfing the Internet. On the other hand I insisted on studying. Not only did I read classics, but also I had online courses given by my teachers.【高分句型一】Besides, I took exercise every day to keep healthy.(做了什么)
I know that many people including doctors, nurses and scientists act bravely and spare no effort to fight against the disaster. I believe we can win the victory at last.(感受)
At this particular time, you should go out as little as possible, isolated. If you go out, you must wear protective masks to prevent yourself from getting infected.【高分句型二】 In addition, you should keep good healthy habits and keep your body clean. You had better avoid gathering. I hope you and your family are safe and healthy. Look forward to your reply.(建议)
Yours, Li Hua 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
13.假设你是Li Ping,请根据你的朋友Robert的邮件内容进行回复。词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 To: Li Ping From: Robert Hi Li Ping,
How's everything going? My work in China is almost done, and I'm going back to America next week. Before leaving, I'd like to buy some gifts for my family and friends. I hope these gifts can show China's traditional culture. Can you give me some advice? Two weeks' business trip is too short for me to know about your country, anyway. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Robert
To: Robert From: Li Ping ________.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Chinese clay art is famous because the clay pieces are so small but they look very real. 中国的泥塑艺术很出名,因为泥塑作品很小,但看起来很逼真。 because以电脑原因状语从句。 【高分句型二】
I believe your family and friends will love them.我相信你的家人和朋友会喜欢他们的。 I believe+宾语从句。 【解答】To: Robert From: Li Ping
I think Chinese clay art can show China's traditional culture. Chinese clay art is famous because the clay pieces are so small but they look very real. 【高分句型一】These small pieces of clay art show the love that all Chinese for life and beauty. I believe your family and friends will love them.【高分句型二】(建议的礼物及原因)
You said two weeks' business trip is too short for you to know about our country. I think you can visit more places. You can get to know Chinese customs and culture in advance. When you are in China, you can go to more places.(关于出差时间短的建议)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
14.暑假马上就要到了,在这个防控疫情的特殊假期,作为中学生,你既应该做好个人防护,同时也要规划好自己的学习和生活,过一个安全、充实的假期.
你校英语网站正在开展以\"My plans for the summer holiday\"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你暑假打算做些什么、为什么想做这些事、你的暑假将会过得怎么样.
提示词语: mask (口罩),go over, draw, housework, fun 提示问题:●What are you going to do? ●Why are you going do these things? ●What is your summer holiday going to be like?
My plans for the summer holiday
During the summer holiday, to stay safe from coronavirus(新冠病毒),I _______. 【分析】【高分句型一】
Second, I will try not to go out.第二,我会尽量不外出. try not to do sth尽量不要做某事. 【高分句型二】
If we have to go out, I should wear masks.如果我必须出去,我应该戴上口罩. if引导条件状语从句.
【解答】During the summer holiday, to stay safe from coronavirus(新冠病毒),I should
follow some important rules.
First of all, I should not believe and spread rumors. Second,I will try not to go out.【高分句型一】If I have to go out, I should wear masks.【高分句型二】Third, I must keep our rooms clean.I need to live a healthy life and eat a healthy diet.Fourth, I should be confident.I am sure to pull through! In the
mean while, during the summer vacation,I am going to study online and finish my homework on time every day.Besides, I will keep doing exercise for half an hour every day to keep healthy.
【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
15.同学们,来到新学校,你认识你的新同学了吗?假如你是Andy,请写一篇文章介绍自己.写作要点:你的名字,年龄,来自哪里;介绍你的家庭成员;还可以说说你最喜欢的运动和音乐.
写作要求:拼写正确,语句通顺,意思连贯,适当发挥,书写工整,60个词左右. 【分析】高分句型一:
There are four people in my family.我家有四口人.句子考查there be结构,be动词遵循就近原则,people是复数形式,be动词使用are. 高分句型二:
My favourite music is\"The Moon Reflected In Er﹣quan \"and my favourite sport is playing football.我最喜欢的音乐是《二泉映月》,我最喜欢的运动是踢足球.句子中playing用动名词形式作表语.
【解答】My name is Andy.I am 13 years old.I am from Dongguan.There are four people in my family.【高分句型一】(我的基本信息)They are my father,my mother,my sister and I.(家庭成员)My favourite music is\"The Moon Reflected In Er﹣quan \"and my favourite sport is playing football.【高分句型二】(爱好)
【点评】本题是小作文,能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
16.请谈论你最喜欢的一次假期旅行经历,请你根据以下提示完成作文. 1.描述你最喜欢的一次假期旅行经历,包括时间、地点、人物、活动. 2.谈论你对这次旅行经历的感受.
3.下次旅行你想去的地方是哪里?简要说明原因.
要求:文章内不得出现真实姓名,学校名等;作文长度不少于70词
I'd like to share one of my traveling experiences with you ____________________________. 【分析】【高分句型一】
When we were tired,we lay on the beach and relaxed.
当我们累了,我们躺在沙滩上和放松.when引导的时间状语从句. 【高分句型二】
The Great Wall is so wonderful that I want to climb it again. 长城是如此美妙,我想再爬一次.so…that…如此…以至于…
【解答】I'd like to share one of my traveling experiences with you.(点题)
I went to Wonderful Beach for a trip with my classmates.There were many people on vacation.They were friendly to each other.【高分句型一】(时间、地点和人物)At first,we swam happily in the sea.Then we tried paragliding.We played beach volleyball.When we were tired,we lay on the beach and relaxed.At noon.we went to have some seafood.It was very delicious!(活动)All of us had a great time.We felt very great.We still wanted to come here on our next trip.(感受)Next time,I want to travel to Beijing,because there are many places of interest.The Great Wall is so wonderful that I want to climb it again.【高分句型二】And I'd also like to eat Beijing roast duck.(下次想去的地方及原因)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
17.家庭是温暖的港湾,家人是最坚固的后盾。我们必须了解和关爱我们的家里人。请结合上文, 写一篇英语短文。 内容包括:
(1)简单介绍家庭成员,包括他们的爱好和工作等 (不少于三人); (2)介绍大家的饮食习惯,说说大家的饮食习惯是否健康; (3)号召家里人注意饮食,加强锻炼。 作文要求:
(4)不能照抄上文;不得在作文中出现真实的学校和学生姓名。 (5)语句连贯,词数70词左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。 There are three people in my family. . 【分析】【高分句型一】
She likes watching TV.她喜欢看电视。 like doing sth喜欢做某事。 【高分句型二】
My parents never eat out because they think the food there is not healthy enough.我的父母从来不出去吃饭,因为他们认为那里的食物不够健康。 because引导原因状语从句。
【解答】There are four people in my family. They are my parents,my sister and me. My parents are both teachers. My father is an English teacher and my mother is a PE teacher. My father loves football. My mother loves reading stories. My sister is lovely and she is a student. She likes watching TV. 【高分句型一】I am a student too. I love travelling. I love my family.(介绍家人的工作和爱好)
My parents never eat out because they think the food there is not healthy enough.【高分句型二】 My sister and I like fried food. We think it's delicious.Obviously, my parents' eating habits are healthy. My sister and I should eat less junk food.(大家的饮食习惯)
We should keep taking exercise to keep healthy. In addition, we should eat more vegetables, fruits and other healthy food.(号召家里人注意饮食,加强锻炼)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
18.朋友对每个人的一生都很重要.下面请你以\"How to Make Friends\"为题,写一篇关于如何交友的英文短文.
写作要求:语句连贯,词数80个左右.参考词汇:similar interests; be afraid to; good listener; be friendly
________________________________________________. 【分析】【高分句型一】
Second, don't be afraid to show people what you are really good at.
第二,不要害怕向别人展示你真正擅长的东西.本句使用了宾语从句what you are really good at. 【高分句型二】
Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. 你的朋友遇到困难时,试着帮助他们,因为患难中的朋友才是真正的朋友.本句使用了较复杂的句型,时间状语从句when they are in trouble;原因状语从句because a friend in need is a friend indeed. 【解答】
How to Make Friends
Friends are important in our daily life.Here are some tips for you to make friends.
First,It's hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time.So you'd better take an active part in activities with people around.( 积极与身边的人一起参与活动)Second, don't be afraid to show people what you are really good at.【高分句型一】Talk about the things you like best.(展示自己,谈论自己喜欢的事情)Third, look at people in the eyes when you talk to them. Be a good listener. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.(交谈技巧)Last but not least, be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.【高分句型二】(对人友好,帮助人)
In this way, you'll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.(总结)
【点评】本题要求以\"How to Make Friends\"为题写一篇短文,对于这种命题形式加提示性词语的作文,一定要紧扣提示性词语写作,避免跑题偏题.提示内容就是本文的写作要点.这些要点构成写作的基本框架.我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点.动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥.
19.根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上.
假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校.该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流.请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排. 内容包括:
1.推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物.
2.介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排.(包括活动的时间、地点和内容)
参考活动:欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera),体验功夫(kung fu),参加广东历史讲座等 作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名.
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右.作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上.
Good evening,everyone.I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students Union.I am very pleased to
welcome
you
to
the
party.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you'll enjoy your stay here! 【分析】高分句型一:
I believe you will be attracted by its beauty.
我相信你会被它的美丽所吸引.will be attracted 一般将来时的被动语态,将会被吸引 高分句型二:
From the activities,I think you will have a better understanding of the culture of Guangdong. 从活动中,我想你会更好地了解广东的文化.have a better understanding of …更好的了解……
【解答】Good evening,everyone.I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students Union.I am very pleased to welcome you to the party.We've prepared some traditional food for you,such as shrimp dumplings,steamed pork ribs.( 两种广东传统食物:虾饺,粉蒸排骨).I wish you'll like them.As for the schedule of your activities,you'll watch a Cantonese opera in the music hall on the first day.I believe you will be attracted by its beauty. 【高分句型一】And you are sure to feel more excited on the second day,as you will learn kungfu from a master in the gym.From the activities,I think you will have a better understanding of the culture of Guangdong. 【高分句型二】(两项广东传统文化活动的安排:欣赏粤剧,体验功夫)I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
20.假如你是李华,最近学校开展\"全民阅读进校园\"读书活动,你和你的同学在课余时间看了许多书.请你根据表格的提示,以演讲的形式分享你最喜欢的一个故事并发表感想.
故事名称 作者 故事内容
The Gifts 美国作家0. Henry 人物:Della & Jim 时间:on Christmas Eve
事件:卖掉自己为之自豪的物品﹣﹣美丽的头发和金表 购买圣诞节礼物 表链和套发梳
得到了更有价值的东西﹣﹣爱
读后感想 读书活动的益处
注意:
……(至少一点) ……(至少一点)
(1)参考词汇: gold watch, beautiful hair,a watch chain,a set of combs (2)请适当拓展,不能直译内容;
(3)词数左右(文章开头及结尾已给出,不计入词数); (4)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分. 【分析】【高分句型一】
It told us a story that a couple Della and Jim bought gifts each other.
它给我们讲述了德拉和吉姆夫妇互相买礼物的一个故事.that引导定语从句. 【高分句型二】
There are many beautiful words in the book, which makes us enjoy the beauty of the world. 文章中有许多优美词汇,这让我们享受到了世界的美丽.which引导非限制性定语从句. 【解答】Boys and girls ,today I introduce a story written by a famous American writer called O.Henry.(作者)It told us a story that a couple Della and Jim bought gifts each other.【高分句型一】 On Christmas Eve,They sold what they were proud of ﹣ beautiful hair and a gold watch. Della sold her beautiful hair to buy a watch chain for Jim and Jim sold his gold watch to buy a set of combs for Della.In the end, they got something more valuable ﹣﹣ love.(故事内容)
I am deeply moved by the great love between the couple.They both sold their treasures just to buy a gift for their lover.(感受)
Have a book and you will have a good time !There are many beautiful words in the book, which makes us enjoy the beauty of the world.【高分句型二】 (读书活动的益处)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
21.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom来信关心你将要参加的中考的情况,请根据以下表格的信息回信告知.
考试日期和科目
1. 考1. 6月16日至18日;
第一天考语文、物理(physics);第二天是数学、政治(politics);第三天是英语和化学(chemistry).
考试准备情况 考试时的状态 对试题的感受 对考试结果的期待 提示词:
1.考进理想的学校: enter my ideal school
初三以来一直在准备……
会有点紧张,但会很快平静下来,因为……
不会很难,但要认真对待. 考进理想的学校……
注意:1. 词数80左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数); 2. 不得透露自己学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分. Dear Tom,
Thank you for your concern. Well, I'm going to take the once﹣a﹣year Senior High School entrance examination. We are arranged to attend the exam on June 16th to 18th, on the first day, Chinese and physics will be tested, the second day maths and politics, the third day English and chemistry.Over the past days,we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9.Besides listening to our teachers carefully in class, we often work deep into night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed.
At first, I will feel a bit nervous but soon I can calm down because Chinese and English are very easy and maths is my favorite subject, you know.So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:
Over the past days, we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9.在过去的日子里,我们一直忙于准备考试,因为我们在9年级.这是一个现在完成进行时的句子,同时考查短语prepare for. 高分句型二:
So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school.所以我想我能取得好成绩,我就能进入我理想的学校.这是一个省略了that的宾语从句. 【解答】Dear Tom,
Thank you for your concern. Well, I'm going to take the once﹣a﹣year Senior High School entrance examination. We are arranged to attend the exam on June 16th to 18th, on the first day, Chinese and physics will be tested, the second day maths and politics, the third day English and chemistry.(考试日期和科目) Over the past days, we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9.(高分句型一) Besides listening to our teachers carefully in class, we often work deep into night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed.(考试准备情况)
At first, I will feel a bit nervous but soon I can calm down because Chinese and English are very easy and maths is my favorite subject, you know.(考试的状态) So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school.(高分句型二)(考试的感受和期
待) Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
22.请根据下表提示,以My good friend为题写一篇英语小短文,向全班同学介绍你的美国朋友Amy的有关情况. 要求:1词数50左右;
2叙事清楚,语句通顺,语意连贯,; 3文中不得出现真实的人名与校名. My good friend. 【分析】【高分句型一】
She has two purple skirts because she likes purple very much她有两条紫色裙子因为她很喜欢紫色.
because引导的原因状语从句. 【高分句型二】
She thinks it's difficult but interesting她认为很难但是有趣. think后是省略了that的宾语从句.
【解答】I have a good friend.Her name is Amy.She is American.Her birthday is on January 5th.(基本信息)Her favorite food is milk and bread.She loves sports.Her favorite sport is baseball.She plays it at school with her friends after class.She has two purple skirts because she likes purple very much.【高分句型一】What's her favorite subject?It's math.She thinks it's difficult but interesting.【高分句型二】(喜好)
【点评】意紧扣文章主题,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
23.寒假就要到了,请你根据图画和方框内的提示词描述你的寒假活动,用完整的句子表达.
The winter holiday is coming very soon.
go to Hai Nan Island,with my family,
sometimes,learn to swim in the sea
sometime,go fishing with my dad
If,not rain,fly kites,in the early morning
when,go home,do my homework.
【分析】1.我要和我的家人去参观海南岛. 2.有时我会在海里学游泳. 3.有时我会和爸爸一起去钓鱼. 4.如果不下雨,我们将在清晨去放风筝. 5.当我回家时,我会尽快做我的家庭作业.
【解答】1.I am going to visit Hai Nan Island with my family.根据:寒假就要到了,应该用一般将来时,be going to+动词原形表示将要做某事.with my family和我的家人. 2.Sometimes I will learn to swim in the sea.根据:寒假就要到了,应该用一般将来时,will+动词原形表示将要做某事.in the sea在海里.
3.Sometimes I will go fishing with my dad.根据:寒假就要到了,应该用一般将来时,will+动词原形表示将要做某事.with my dad和爸爸一起.
4.If it doesn't rain,we will go to fly kites in the early morning.这是if引导的条件状语从句,主句是一般将来时,从句用的是一般现在时.
5.When I go back home,I will do my homework as soon as possible.这是when引导的时间状语从句,当…时候.主句是一般将来时,从句用的是一般现在时.as soon as possible尽
快地
【点评】考查连词成句.结合所给的题干,确定固定搭配,主谓宾定状补结构.再完成句子.
24.以下是Nick的基本信息,请根据这些信息和要求,写一篇英语短文,向英语报社投稿.(要求:1字数在80词左右;2有适当发挥)
项目 生日 出生地 主要事迹
信息及要求 1982年12月4日
澳大利亚
1一生下来就没有双臂和双腿,但学会了游泳,穿衣服,使用电脑. 221岁大学毕业后周游世界做演讲,与年轻人谈人生和梦想,至今有三百
多万人听过他的演讲.
3到过中国5次,2008年来成都帮助地震中的幸存者(survivors).
你的感想
Nick is a world﹣famous speaker. . 【分析】高分句型: 高分句型一:
Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams.然后他开始环球旅行,就生活和梦想给年轻人做演讲.begin to do sth.是固定短语,意思是\"开始做某事\"
travel around the world 是固定短语,意思是\"环球旅行\"give speech是固定短语,意思是\"做演讲\" 高分句型二:
From his story,I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life.通过这个故事,我学到了在生活中遇到困难的时候,我们不能放弃.that引导的是宾语从句,作learn的宾语,give up是固定短语,意思是\"放弃\"
【解答】Nick is a world﹣famous speaker.His experience inspires a lot of people in the world.He was born on December 4th,1982 in Australia.Unluckily,he was born without arms or legs,but he learnt to swim,get dressed,used a computer and so on.At 21,Nick graduated from university.Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams.【高分句型一】(介绍主要事迹)He has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far.He has ever visited China five times.In 2008,he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake.
From his story,I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life.【高分句型二】(说明自己的感想)
【点评】首先要仔细审题,根据表格提供的内容要点进行叙述,内容要点要全面,表述的时候语言要地道,可以选用不定式,宾语从句等可以提高文采的结构.
…
25.
要求
1.请注意时态,内容需涵盖所有图片,图片顺序可根据需要作调整. 2.词数:80个左右.日记的格式已给出,不计入总词数.
参考词汇: go for a walk, milk a cow, feed chickens, take some photos
June 1st, Saturday
_____________. 【分析】高分句型一
I fed chickens there.此句是一般过去时的陈述句.运用短语feed chickens\"喂鸡\",此句可翻译为\"我在那里喂鸡.\" 高分句型二
I had a good time today.此句是一般过去时的陈述句.运用短语have a good time \"过的愉快\",此句可翻译为\"今天我过得很愉快.\" 【解答】June 1st, Saturday
Today was Saturday.It was sunny.I had a pleasant day on my uncle's farm.(要点一,说明时间、天气和目的.)I helped my uncle milk a cow there. I fed chickens there.(高分句型一)I rode a horse. It was interesting.I went for a walk around the farm and talked with my uncle.I learned a lot from him about farming.I also took some photos.(要点二,说明在农场所做的事情.) All in all,this day was exciting.I had a good time today.(要点三,自己的感受.)
【点评】本题是图画作文,能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
26.请根据所给提示以\"My friend Simon\"为题,写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Simon,包括以下要点.13岁,来自美国但是现在和家人居住在扬州.学习刻苦,最喜欢的科目是数学和英语,是校足球队成员,周末经常和同学去踢球,经常观看足球比赛,最喜欢的球员是姚明.
注意:(1)要点清楚,语言流畅,字数80词左右
(2)短文须包括所有要点内容,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥短发,带眼镜,又高又瘦.擅长电脑.
【分析】【高分句型一】
He studies so hard that he always gets good grades.
他学习很努力,总是取得好成绩.so…that…如此…以至于… 【高分句型二】
He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up.
长大后想成为像姚明那样的篮球运动员.when引导时间状语从句.want to be想成为… 【解答】My friend Simon
I have a good friend.His name is Simon.He is 13 years old.He comes from America.He now lives in Yangzhou with his family.(基本信息)He studies so hard that he always gets good grades. 【高分句型一】His favorite subjects are math and English.(学习)He is a member of the school football team.On weekends, he often plays football and watches football matches with his classmates(周末做什么).His favorite player is Yao Ming.He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up.【高分句型二】(最喜欢的球员) 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
27.你们班有很多电视迷,很多同学不知道选择什么节目,你决定推荐央视的《朗读者》给同学们.
1.由董卿主持,每次涵盖不同主题,深受人们喜爱,值得观看; 2.朗读让人认识世界,增长知识; 3.邀请不同人来朗读,讲述感人故事;
4.比如,一位父亲通过读一封信来表达对儿子的爱; 5.这个节目鼓励我们……我们应该……
注意:1.必须包括上述所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯; 2.要点中第5点省略号处请用2﹣3句话合理发挥; 3.词数90个左右,短文开头不计入总词数. 参考词汇:主持:host
A new program called The Reader is a great surprise to us viewers.I would like to recommend it to you.____________. 【分析】【高分句型一】
It is popular with people.它深受人们欢迎. be popular with受……欢迎
【高分句型二】
This program encourages us to read as many books as possible and communicate with different people to show our feelings by reading aloud.这个节目鼓励我们阅读尽可能多的书籍,并与不同的人交流,通过大声朗读表达我们的感情.
encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事;as…as…和…一样;by doing sth通过做某事. 【解答】A new program called The Reader is a great surprise to us viewers.I would like to recommend it to you.(点题)
This program is hosted by Dong Qing with different topics everytime.It is popular with people.【高分句型一】It is worth watching.(深受喜爱) It tries to tell viewers that reading helps people know about the world and improve their knowledge.(朗读让人认识世界,增长知识) It invites different people to read aloud and tell the moving stories behind them.(节目内容) For example,once a father showed his son his love by reading a letter.(举例说明) This program encourages us to read as many books as possible and communicate with different people to show our feelings by reading aloud.【高分句型二】We should try to be a good reader.(节目的意义)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
28.There is a new Wanda Plaza Shopping Mall. You want to go there with your friend Monica and buy some clothes for the New Year Party. Please write an email to her.
1. Introduce(介绍) the new mall, including how to go there. (Bus 82, Underground Line 2, …)
2.Tell her about your favourite place in the mall. 3 .Tell her what clothes you want to buy and why. 注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;请适当发挥; 3.词数80左右,邮件开头已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Monica,
I am very happy to tell you there is a new shopping mall near our school. All the best, Linda
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are all kinds of clothes suitable for students, which give us more choices. 有各种各样适合学生穿的衣服,给了我们更多的选择。定语从句 【高分句型二】
I want to buy a uniform, because the new year is an important festival, wearing a uniform will be more formal.
我想买一套制服,因为新年是一个重要的节日,穿制服会比较正式。want to do sth想做某事
【解答】Dear Monica,
I am very happy to tell you there is a new shopping mall near our school.It's name is Wanda Plaza Shopping Mall.You can get there by Bus 82 or by underground Line 2. In this shopping center, there are all kinds of beautiful clothes. I like the student counter best. There are all kinds of clothes suitable for students, which give us more choices. (喜欢的理由)【高分句型一】I want to buy a uniform, because the new year is an important festival, wearing a uniform will be more formal. (想买什么东西)【高分句型二】What about you? What do you want to buy? Come with me.
All the best,
Linda
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
29.Many schools across the world have started online lessons because of COVID﹣19. Your e﹣friend Danny in the UK is curious about your online lessons and writes to ask you about it. Please read his email and write back to him. Dear Sunny
How are you going these days? I've just heard that we're going to have online lessons next week. Can you tell me how your online lessons are going? How many lessons do you have in a day? What about your homework? What do you think of your online lessons? Hope to receive your reply soon! Yours, Danny 注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称: 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范:
3.词数 80 左右,信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数. Dear Danny,
We have already come back to school and life at school is almost the same as before except that we have to wear masks all day.
It was really a very special experience. . Anyway, online lessons helped us go through the hardest time. We'll keep it in mind forever.
Yours, Sunny
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think online classes have many advantages.我认为在线课程有很多优点. I think+并与出口. 【高分句型二】
This prevents people from touching each other.这可以防止人们互相接触.
prevent…from doing sth阻止…做某事. 【解答】Dear Danny,
We have already come back to school and life at school is almost the same as before except that we have to wear masks all day.It was really a very special experience.Now let me tell you how your online lessons are going.(点题)
We have seven classes a day, four in the morning and three in the afternoon.(一天几节课)The teachers show homework online.Students hand in their homework through computers and mobile phones.Then the teacher checks it and returns it to the students.(关于家庭作业)I think online classes have many advantages.【高分句型一】Students can have classes at home instead of going to school.This prevents people from touching each other..【高分句型二】In addition, the teachers and students can share teaching resources each other.(我对网课的看法)
Anyway, online lessons helped us go through the hardest time. We'll keep it in mind forever.(总结全文)
Yours, Sunny
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
30.Write a passage within 60 words about your family. Tell us: your family members where they are from their jobs
how your family is
some interesting things (if there are some) 【分析】【高分句型一】 There are four people in my family.
我家有四口人。本句使用了there be句型。 There be +名词+地点,表示某地有…… 【高分句型二】
My sister, who is five years older than I, is a doctor in the People's Hospital of our county. 我姐姐比我大五岁,是我们县人民医院的医生。本句使用了非限制性定语从句who is five years older than I.
【解答】My name is Li Hua. There are four people in my family. 【高分句型一】They are my father, my mother, my sister and I.(家庭成员)We are from Nanjing. (来自南京) My father is an engineer. He is now working in Africa, helping to build a power station. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a middle school. My sister, who is five years older than I, is a doctor in the People's Hospital of our county. 【高分句型二】She loves her work and does it well. I am a middle school student. I enjoy reading a lot.(工作及爱好) That is my family. We love each other devotedly.(家庭怎么样)
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文.它要求将所规定的材料内
容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力.所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数.
31.你在英国的笔友Tom最近很苦恼,写信向你求助.请结合所给背景新闻,根据Tom的来信,写一封回信帮助他. 注意:
1.回信必须解决来信提及的全部问题,并结合新闻作适当发挥. 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范. 3.词数80左右,信件的开头已为你写出,不计入总词数. Dear Lin Tao,
I'm so worried these days. Perhaps you've known the news. Is Maths really so important? How can I learn Maths well? I have difficulty learning it. What should I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Tom
Dear Tom,
It's a pity that British pupils were 3 years behind Chinese in Maths. I think Maths is of great importance to us and we must try to study it well. In fact, learning Maths well is not so difficult. First, listen to your teacher carefully and take notes in class. This is the most important for you. Then, you'd better do some exercises to practice sums in your spare time. Last, believe yourself. If you keep trying, nothing is impossible. Of course, you'll face some difficulties. Don't worry! Surely your teacher and classmates can give you a helping hand.
Follow these steps, you'll love Maths and finally be good at it.. .
Best wishes Lin Tao
【分析】高分句型一
I think Maths is of great importance to us and we must try to study it well.我认为数学对我们很重要,我们必须好好学习.这是一个宾语从句,I hope是主句,后面的是宾语从句. 高分句型二
If you keep trying, nothing is impossible.如果你继续努力,没有什么是不可能的. 这是if引导的条件状语从句,如果……. 【解答】Dear Tom,
It's a pity that British pupils were 3 years behind Chinese in Maths. I think Maths is of great importance to us and we must try to study it well【高分句型一,注意宾语从句的使用】.【开头点明主题】
In fact, learning Maths well is not so difficult. First, listen to your teacher carefully and take notes in class. This is the most important for you. Then, you'd better do some exercises to practice sums in your spare time. Last, believe yourself. If you keep trying, nothing is impossible【高分句型二,注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】. Of course, you'll face some difficulties. Don't worry! Surely your teacher and classmates can give you a helping hand.【正文部分详细介绍怎么学数学】
Follow these steps, you'll love Maths and finally be good at it. 【结尾紧扣主题】
Best wishes Lin Tao
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but, so,then等.
32.Everyone has his or her interests and hobbies.
Please write a short passage within 50 words about one of your hobbies and why you like it, .
【分析】【高分句型一】
Also,I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. 此外,我参加各种体育活动来增强体质.in order to 为了,目的是 【高分句型二】
All in all,the more I exercise, the healthier I'll be.
总之,我锻炼得越多,我就越健康.the +比较级,the+比较级,越……越…… 【解答】
My hobby
My hobby is to play sports.Here are the reasons for taking part in sports.(开篇点题)I usually play sports when I feel tired after study. I just want to relax myself and have fun.(锻炼可以使人放松,有乐趣) Also,I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger.【高分句型一】(变得更强壮) What's more,I want to be slim and pretty by doing sports.(变得漂亮)
All in all,the more I exercise, the healthier I'll be.【高分句型二】
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文.它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力.所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数.
33.There was a party last night. Please write about the party with about 60 words. Your writing should include: what party it was;
what people were doing at the party; whether (是否) it was a nice party.
There was a party last night. 【分析】【高分句型一】
Our classmates and teachers were invited to attend the party. be invited to do sth表示\"被邀请做某事\"。这句话意为:我们的同学和老师被邀请到了这个聚会。 【高分句型二】
We played games and had a good time. have a good time表示\"玩得愉快\"。这句话意为:我们玩游戏且玩得愉快。
【解答】There was a party last night. It was held to celebrate Christmas Day. It was at the hall of the teachers' building from half past six to ten. Our classmates and teachers were invited to attend the party(高分句型一). Some students sang beautiful songs and danced. Other students played the guitar. We played games and had a good time(高分句型二). It was a successful party.(介绍这次晚会的时间、地点以及人们的活动,并指出这是一个成功的晚会。)
【点评】结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般过去时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:There was…,It was…,Some students sang…,We played…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
34.最近,你们学校公众号\"佳文共赏\"栏日将以\"My hero\"为题开展一次作文 评选,请以此为题写一篇短文,介绍你所敬佩的一位文体类名人,向该栏目投稿.
My hero Talents and achievements Difficulties he / she met and how he /
she dealt with them
Useful expression:
have a gift for, win an award for, … never give up achieve success through, …
Charity work
Your opinion(s) about him / her 要求:1. 80 词左右,语句流畅通顺; 2. 文章需涵盖以上要点,并作适当发挥; 3. 文中不得出现任何考生真实姓名; 【分析】【高分句型一】
far more than, devote…to… be famous for / as, …
I think he is my hero, not only because he is famous for playing badminton, but also because he is a kind man.
我认为他是我的英雄,不仅因为他以打羽毛球而闻名,也因为他是一个善良的人.I think+宾语从句; not only…but also…不仅…而且… 【高分句型二】
I want to work hard to make great progress in my study.
我要努力学习,取得更大进步.want to do sth想要做某事;动词不定式做目的状语,make progress取得进步. 【解答】My hero
My name is Zhao Ming Hao.I am crazy about sports.My hero is Lin Dan(点题,我的偶像是林丹).Lin Dan has got great achievements.He has a gift for playing badminton and won won the badminton Olympic championship.(天赋和成就)He had some technical problems in training, but he never gives up achieving success through many years' of hard work.(遇到的问题以及解决办法)He loves charity and has donated far more than one million yuan to charity successively.(慈善工作)I think he is my hero, not only because he is famous for playing badminton, but also because he is a kind man. 【高分句型一】
As a student,I decide to learn from Lin Dan.I will try to achieve a balance between my school work and hobbies.I want to work hard to make great progress in my study.【高分句型二】(我的观点和努力方向)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
35.News from TEENS:
There will be some new changes in China's education system since this fall.One of the biggest changes will be a greater focus on traditional Chinese culture.According to the new standards,students will be recommended to recite 72 ancient poems and other writings.Students will be asked to read more classical literature(古典文学). Students in your grade have a discussion about the news.Here are their opinions.
Opinions about greater focus on traditional Chinese culture Disagree
• It's difficult to recite so many poems and other
writings.
• We don't have enough time to read or recite.
Agree
• It's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese
culture.
• Classical literature can bring us cultural
confidence.
Your opinion(s): …
What do you think of the changes?Do you agree it's necessary to pay much attention to traditional Chinese culture?Write a short passage to express your ideas. 注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范; 3.词数80左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数.
It's said that there will be some new changes in China's education system since this fall.One of the biggest changes will be a greater focus on traditional Chinese culture. Different people have different opinions.Here are their opinions.
Some think few students can recite 72 ancient poems and other writings.Because it's difficult to recite so many poems and other writings.Most of students are busy studying,so they don't have enough time to read or recite.
Others think it is a good idea.They think it's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese culture.Also,classical literature can bring us cultural confidence. In my opinion ,it is good to recite some ancient poems properly,but don't impose on the students.We should learn according to our own interests. 【分析】【高分句型一】
Because it's difficult to recite so many poems and other writings.因为背诵这么多诗歌和其他作品是很困难的.
it is+形容词 to do sth做某事是…的. 【高分句型二】
They think it's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese culture.他们认为学习中国传统文化是我们的责任.
They think+宾语从句;it's one's duty to do sth做某事是某人的职责.
【解答】It's said that there will be some new changes in China's education system since this fall.One of the biggest changes will be a greater focus on traditional Chinese culture.Different people have different opinions.Here are their opinions.(点题,引出下文)
Some think few students can recite 72 ancient poems and other writings.Because it's difficult to recite so many poems and other writings.【高分句型一】Most of students are busy studying,so they don't have enough time to read or recite.(反对观点)
Others think it is a good idea.They think it's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese culture.【高分句型二】Also,classical literature can bring us cultural confidence.(赞成观点)
In my opinion ,it is good to recite some ancient poems properly,but don't impose on the
students.We should learn according to our own interests.(我的观点)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
36.在一节写作课上,老师要求你们写一篇名为\"心目中的同学\"的短文,现在请你用英文来介绍一下你的同学Mike.
1)Mike学习刻苦,喜欢思考,能想出许多有创意的点子;
2)他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍,爱迪生的故事对他影响最大; 3)他对搞小发明很着迷,迄今为止,他已几次因其发明获奖; 4)现在学习忙碌,但他从未放弃爱好,他说这真是其乐无穷; 5)他的梦想…我认为… 注意事项:
1)短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯; 2)第5要点的内容必须用2至3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥; 3)词数90个左右,短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数. 参考词汇:
有创意的 creative 爱迪生 Edison
My classmate Mike ishard﹣working.He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas.In his childhood,he read many books about scientists.The story of Edison influenced him most.He is crazy about inventing things.So far,he has won several awards for inventions.Now he is busy with his study,but he has never given up his hobby.He says it's great fun for him.His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison.I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day. 【分析】这是一篇提纲作文.内容是介绍一下你的同学Mike.时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时.人称主要为第三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文. 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点: 1)Mike学习刻苦,喜欢思考,能想出许多有创意的点子;
2)他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍,爱迪生的故事对他影响最大; 3)他对搞小发明很着迷,迄今为止,他已几次因其发明获奖; 4)现在学习忙碌,但他从未放弃爱好,他说这真是其乐无穷; 5)他的梦想…我认为… 常用到的重点短语: come up with 想出… be crazy about 对…着迷 give up 放弃
be known for 因…而著名 【高分句型】
1.His dream is ①to be an inventor②as great as Edison.
①动词不定式做表语,和be动词is构成系表结构. ②as…as与…一样.
2.I think①he will ②be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day ①后接省略了that的宾语从句. ②be known for 因…而著名
【解答】My classmate Michael is hard﹣working.He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas.(Mike学习刻苦,喜欢思考,能想出许多有创意的点子)In his childhood,he read many books about scientists.The story of Edison influenced him most.(他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍,爱迪生的故事对他影响最大)He is crazy about inventing things.So far,he has won several awards for inventions.(他对搞小发明很着迷,迄今为止,他已几次因其发明获奖)Now he is busy with his study,but he has never given up his hobby.He says it's great fun for him.(现在学习忙碌,但他从未放弃爱好,他说这真是其乐无穷)His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison.【高分句型】(他的梦想是成为像爱迪生一样的发明家)I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day.【高分句型】(我认为他会实现梦想)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文.考生在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容.尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容,避免使用无把握或偏、难句型.注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯
37.为了宣传丰富多彩的课外活动如\"城宫计划\"、\"校本选修\"、\"社会大课堂\"等,学校的英文校刊正在开展主题为\"课外活动\"的征文活动.请你写一篇不少于40词的征文,简单介绍你校的课外活动情况,内容包括:有哪些活动,你选择了哪些,你的感受如何. 下列词语和图片供参考:
learn,paper cutting,Beijing Opera,dance,do sports,choose,interesting
Our school life is really colorful. Every afternoon we have different kinds of things to do,such as paper cutting,Beijing Opera,singing,dancing and Taijiquan.There are also lots of sports every day.Students can choose any of them to learn.I go to two of them,on Monday afternoon,I learn Beijing Opera and on Thursday afternoon I play football.Sports are always interesting and Beijing Opera makes me learn a lot about our culture.I always feel proud and happy.I love my school life! . 【分析】高分句型:
Every afternoon we have different kinds of things to do,such as paper cutting,Beijing Opera,singing,dancing and Taijiquan.每天下午我们都有各种各样的事情要做,比如剪纸、京剧、唱歌、跳舞和太极拳.这里 different kinds of 表示各种各样的,to引导的不定式作定语,such as表示例如.
Students can choose any of them to learn.学生可以选择其中任何一个学习.这里choose to do sth表示选择做某事.
【解答】Our school life is really colorful.(引出话题)Every afternoon we have different kinds of things to do,such as paper cutting,Beijing Opera,singing,dancing and Taijiquan(高分句型).There are also lots of sports every day(每天的课外活动).Students can choose any of them to learn(高分句型).I go to two of them,on Monday afternoon,I learn Beijing Opera and on Thursday afternoon I play football.(我参加的活动)Sports are always interesting and Beijing Opera makes me learn a lot about our culture.I always feel proud and happy.I love my school life!(我的感受)
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.
38.每年的4月23日是世界读书日。在我校的读书周中将开展\"一人•一书\"的活动,向你的同学、亲友或师长推荐一本你喜欢的书。请你根据这项活动的主题及以下图表,写一篇推荐书目的英语短文参加活动。
注意事项:
(1)短文须根据图表自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; (2)词数在80个左右,短文首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数; (3)短文必须写在答题卷指定位置上。 【分析】【高分句型一】
This book mainly tells the story of four people who go through hardships and finally reach the Western Paradise and obtain Buddhist the Scriptures.这本书主要讲述了四个人历经艰难困苦,最终到达西天,获得佛经的故事。
who引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】
My favorite character is Monkey King,not only because he is handsome,but also he is very clever and brave.我最喜欢的角色是孙悟空,不仅因为他英俊,而且他非常聪明和勇敢。 not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【解答】My favorite book is The Journey to the West.It is a book about fairy tales.It's very interesting and its author is Wu Cheng'en.There are four important characters in this book,they are Monk Xuanzang,Monkey King,Pigsy,Sandy. (人物)This book mainly tells the story of four people who go through hardships and finally reach the Western Paradise and obtain Buddhist the Scriptures.【高分句型一】(主要内容)I would like to recommend it to people who like fairy tales.
My favorite character is Monkey King,not only because he is handsome,but also he is very clever and brave. 【高分句型二】I like this book very much,on the one hand,it is very interesting,on the other hand,it teaches me to persevere,no matter how big the difficulty is,we should persevere,only in this way can we succeed.(喜欢的理由)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
39.上周日我和Sandy去野生动物园参观,了解到很多动物的生存现状,想在School newsletter上发文呼吁同学们共同保护动物.请就下面表格提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文. 内容提示:
现状 原因 应对措施 建议
注意:
1.短文须包括所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯; 2.第5个要点的内容须展开合理想象,适当发挥1﹣2句; 3.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数.
Last Sunday,Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park. . 【分析】高分句型一:
We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands.
句中\"that wildlife had nowhere to live\"为宾语从句,\"because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands\"为原因状语从句.句中短语有\"keep doing sth 持续做某事\".这句话意为:我们了解到动物居无定所,因为人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地. 高分句型二:
We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being
居无定所
人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地
无食可觅 温度降至零度以下
不仅可以立法,还可以多建自然保护区(nature reserve)
作为中学生,…
killed.
句中使用短语有\"not only…but also…不仅…而且…\"、\"protect sb from doing sth 保护…免受…\".这句话意为:我们不仅可以立法,还可以多建自然保护区来保护动物免受杀害. 【解答】Last Sunday,Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park.We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands.【高分句型一】Also when the temperature dropped below zero,wildlife had no food to eat.(动物的生存现状)We should take action to prevent natural disasters and protect wildlife.We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being killed.【高分句型二】As students,we should always ask our parents and relatives not to buy any fur coats.We should try to keep our world clean and peace.(提出建议)
【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累,避免出现语法错误,写作时注意条理清楚,语意通畅.
40.俗话说\"远亲不如近邻\",邻居对我们的生活非常重要。请根据下面所给的要点,以\"My Neighbour\"为题写一篇短文介绍你的邻居。 要点如下: 1.基本情况 2.职业 3.性格 4.你的想法 注意:
(1)短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯; (2)第3要点请用2﹣3句话自由发挥,词数70个左右。 (3)开头已给出,不计入总数。
My Neighbour
As the saying goes \"A neighbour is better than a distant relative.(远亲不如近邻)\" Neighbours are important in our lives._______ 【分析】【高分句型一】
He works hard and shows the visitors around Wuxi. 他努力工作,并带领游客参观无锡。 show sb around带令某人参观…… 【高分句型二】
When people are in trouble,they usually ask him for help.当人们有困难时,他们通常会找他帮忙。
when引导时间状语从句。 【解答】
My Neighbour
As the saying goes \"A neighbour is better than a distant relative.(远亲不如近邻)\" Neighbors are important in our lives.(点题)
I am Jim. I live in Sunshine Community.I have a new neighbour,Joanna. We live in the same
Joanna,跟我住在同一栋楼里,住5楼 导游(tour guide), 带领游客参观无锡
友好,…;乐于助人,…;
我们社区每个人都喜欢她,有她这样的邻居很幸运。
building.He lives on the fifth floor.(基本情况) He is a tour guide. He works hard and shows the visitors around Wuxi. 【高分句型一】(职业)He is kind﹣hearted and ready to help others.When people are in trouble,they usually ask him for help.【高分句型二】(性格)Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him.So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour. I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like our neighbours.(我的想法) 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
41.学校将举办英语写作比赛,请根据所给提示,以\"My life in 20 years\"为题,写一篇短文,分享你对未来的憧憬.
注意事项:
1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥. My life in 20 years
I'm always working hard for a bright future I imagine
【分析】这是一篇图表作文.内容是针对\"My life in 20 years\"根据图表内容写一篇作文.时态主要为一般将来时.人称主要为第一人称及第三人称.要注意上下文的衔接. 写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文. 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点: 1.家庭:照顾父母 2.工作:接受新的挑战 3.朋友:谈论过去的校园生活 4.其他方面 5.总结
常用到的重点短语: take care of 照看;照顾
take on new challenges 接受新的挑战
talk about the past school life 谈论过去的校园生活 too…to…太…以至于不能… play an important role 扮演重要的角色 高分句型:
1.It's my dream job that can save lots of people's lives.它是我可以挽救别人生命的梦想工作 that can save lots of people's lives是定语从句,修饰先行词dream job.
2.My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later.我的父母年龄太大了以至于不能照顾自己. too…to…太…而不能… 【解答】My life in 20 years
I'm always working hard for a bright future I imagine.Life in 20 years will sure be busy and wonderful.(引出话题)As for my job,I will be a doctor.It's my dream job that can save lots of people's lives.(高分句型)I will take on new challenges because I love it.(工作)My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later.(高分句型)So taking good care of them will be my duty.(家庭) I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with.It will be funny to talk with them.(朋友) Besides,Life in 20 years will sure be wonderful.With the technology development,robots will play an important role in twenty years.Every family will have one or more of them.So will I.My children will learn from the Internet,which would save all the paper needed to print textbooks.
In a word,I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life!(美好祝愿) 【点评】这是一篇图表给出材料的作文,图表中给出的材料较为丰富,考生在写作时,图表内容必须包括在内.在自己的观点部分,考生需要自己适当的发挥,建议考生在平时的英语学习中积累一些常用到的重点句型和短语,出彩的发挥会给文章增色不少.
42.下面是某一英文报上刊登的一封读者来信,请你给这位中学生写封回信. Dear editor,
I have a big problem now.You see,I am a little shy.Sometimes I really don't know whom I should ask for help when I am in trouble.I am always afraid that I will disturb(打扰)them What should I do?Can you give me some advice? Yours, Lucy 要求:
1.回信的内容要包括以下要点: (1)首先要学会与人交流,多交朋友;
(2)可以求助于同学和朋友,因为年龄相仿,容易相互理解; (3)可以求助于老师和家长,因为他们愿意帮你,也懂得更多. 2.为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容.
3.词数90左右.信的开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数. Dear Lucy,
What you said is common with some middle school students.Here is my advice. Yours, Peter.
【分析】高分句型一:
First,you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. 句中使用短语有:\"communicate with sb 跟某人沟通\"、\"make friends 交朋友\"、\"as…as possible 尽可能…\".这句话意为:首先,你应该学习怎么跟别人交流,尽可能多的交朋友. 高分句型二:
Besides,you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for help. 句中使用短语有:\"tell sb about sth 告诉某人关于某事\"、\"ask sb for help 向某人寻求帮助\".这句话意为:另外,你可以告诉老师或父母你的问题,并向他们寻求帮助. 【解答】Dear Lucy,
What you said is common with some middle school students.Here is my advice.(开篇点题)
First,you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible.【高分句型一】Then when you are in trouble,you can ask your classmates or friends for help because they are the same age as you.I think you can understand each other easily.Besides,you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for help.【高分句型二】You see,they are always ready to help you.What's more,they know more about the problems.(提出建议)
I hope you think my advice is worth taking and can get better soon.(表达祝福) Yours, Peter
【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累,避免出现语法错误,写作时注意条理清楚,语意通畅.
43.青少年杂志社正在征集关于朋友的文章.请你以\"My Best Friend\"为题,写一篇英文介绍你的好朋友Li Hua.
品性
善良:能为别人保密; 乐于助人…(举一例说明).
爱好
阅读:经常从学校图书室借书; 旅游:参观过北京的许多景点; 痴迷DIY:…(举一例说明)
理想
…(自拟)
要求:1.全文字数90词左右.文章开头已给出,不计入单词总数. 2.条理清楚,书写工整,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确.
3.内容必须包含表格中的提示信息,并适当发挥;文中不能出现真实的人名,校名. My Best Friend
Li Hua is my best friend. . . 【分析】【高分句型一】
He is crazy about DIY.他痴迷DIY. be crazy about 痴迷于…
【高分句型二】
His dream is to be a social worker.他的梦想是成为一名社会工作者. to be a social worker,不定式作表语. 【解答】My Best Friend
Li Hua is my best friend.He is kind and can keep a secret for others. He is willing to help others any time.Last week,he helped a lost boy find his parents on his way home.(品性)He likes reading and often borrows books from the school library. He also likes travelling.He visited many places of interest in Beijing last year. He is crazy about DIY.【高分句型一】He once spent a whole day making a shelf by himself.(爱好)
His dream is to be a social worker.【高分句型二】Then he can help more people.(理想) 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
44.
写作要求:
1.仔细观察上面的两幅图片,然后用英语描述图片内容. 2.你赞同上述图片中的哪一种教育方式,为什么? 3.谈谈你的父母平时是怎样教育你的.
注意:1.词数90左右.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息. From the pictures above,we can see that 【分析】高分句型一
If you do not study,you will end up like him.如果你不学习,你最终会像他一样. 这是if引导的条件状语从句,主句是一般将来时,从句用的是一般现在时. 高分句型二
My parents told me to respect everyone when I was young.我的父母当我小的时候就告诉我,要尊重每一个人. 这是when引导的时间状语从句,当…时候.
【解答】From the pictures above,we can see that two women with their children were waiting at the bus stop,a cleaner was cleaning the street nearby,a woman said to her son:\"If you do not study,you will end up like him.【高分句型一,注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】\",another woman said to her daughter:\"If you do study well,you will be able to make a better world for him.\"【要点一,描述图片内容】I think the second women's education is correct,
we should not look down upon the cleaner,their work is great【要点二,赞同哪一种教育方式】.My parents told me to respect everyone when I was young【高分句型二,注意时间状语从句的使用】.【要点三,你的父母平时是怎样教育你的】
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.
45.最近,你们班开展了一次主题班会,主要讨论了作为中学生如何更好地与父母沟通交流.假如你是李华,请根据下面的内容和要求给父母写一封信.文中不得出现真实的个人信息. 内容提示:
1.告诉父母自己三年来的学习情况和收获: 2.和父母说说自己在成长过程中的一些心里话;
3.表达自己对父母的爱,并告诉父母自己会继续努力学习,不让他们担心,做开心一家人. 注意:
1.词数90左右.信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数; 2.信中须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥; 3.信中不得不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息. My dear mother and father,
I will graduate from school soon,and I'd like to talk about______________ Wish you all the best.
Yours Li Hua.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think I studied hard,made some good friends and was really happy.我认为我努力学习,取得了一些好朋友,真的很开心. I think+宾语从句 【高分句型二】
I will keep on studying hard to get good grades and achieve my dream.我将继续努力学习,取得好成绩,实现我的梦想.
keep on doing sth继续做某事;to get good grades and achieve my dream是不定式表目的. 【解答】My dear mother and father,
I will graduate from school soon,and I'd like to talk about my life and studies in school to you.(要点一:三年来的学习情况和收获)During the past three years.I think I studied hard,made some good friends and was really happy.【高分句型一】But there was probably something wrong between us.(要点二:和父母亲说说心里话)I know you love me so much,but I also know you may be not interested in some of my hobbies,such as playing basketball,playing the guitar and chatting with my friends.They really waste time,but they
are parts of my life.So I hope you can encourage and support me to do something that I like.Now I have already grown up a lot.I will keep on studying hard to get good grades and achieve my dream.【高分句型二】Besides,I hope you can spare your time to stay and chat with me,so we can get on better.I love you very much and I believe we will be a happy family forever.(要点三:表达自己的目标) Wish you all the best.
Yours Li Hua.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
46.苏州国际旅游节即将在五月举办.假如你是李明,想要邀请南京的朋友王雷来你家做客.根据下面提供的信息,用英语写一封邀请信.
地理位置 社区
市中心公寓,住9楼,离观前街只有2公里
绿树环绕,干净整洁
邻居友好,乐于助人(至少举一例)
路线
乘火车从苏州火车站出来:左转进入人民路,往前; 第三个路口右转,你就会看到一个超市;我家就在超市的对面.
注意:(1)词数90左右.邀请信的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数. (2)邀请信须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺. (3)邀请信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息. Dear Wanglei,
I'm very happy to invite you to my new home.
Welcome to my home.I'm looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,Liming
【分析】【高分句型一】
We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this.我们很幸运,生活在这样的社区. be lucky to do sth幸运的做某事. 【高分句型二】
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon.我期待着尽快见到你. look forward to doing sth期待做某事. 【解答】Dear Wanglei,
I am very happy to invite you to my new home.I live in a flat on the ninth floor in the city center.It is only five kilometers away from the Guanqian Street.(地理位置)
There are many green trees around my neighborhood.It's clean and tidy here.The air is fresh,too.The neighbours are kind and helpful.The college volunteers often share their skills and help us with different problems.We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this.(社区)【高分句型一】
Let me tell you the way to my home.You can take the train.Get out from Suzhou Railway
Station.Turn left into Renmin Road and go straight on.Turn right at the third turning,and you'll see a supermarket.My home is just opposite it. (路线)
Welcome to my home.I'm looking forward to meeting you soon.(期待)【高分句型二】 Yours, Liming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
47.假如你是Jim,上周参加了八年级一班学生举行的一个班会,主题是\"Should students chat
on QQ?\".请根据下面的表格提示,写一篇英文短文.
人数 理由
支持 30 1、交友 2、丰富生活 3、…
不支持 20 1、费时 2、陪伴家人 3、…
你的观点 少聊QQ,多读书…
注意:1.短文必须写在答题卡的指定区域,词数90字左右(不含以写好部分). 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,但不要逐条翻译. 3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯. Should students chat on QQ?
Last week I attended a class meeting of Class 1,Grade 8.They talked about if it is good for students to chat on QQ. 【分析】【高分句型一】
It's easy for friends to contact with each other on QQ朋友们在QQ上彼此联系很容易. it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的,it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
【高分句型二】
They say we should spend more time with our family members and friends.他们说我们应该多和家人和朋友在一起.
say后是省略 了that的宾语从句. 【解答】Should students chat on QQ?
Last week I attended a class meeting of Class 1,Grade 8.They talked about if it is good for students to chat on QQ.
30 of us think students should chat on QQ.They say QQ helps us make more friends.It's easy for friends to contact with each other on QQ.【高分句型一】They all say QQ makes our life more colourful.(支持和理由)And 20 of us think we shouldn't chat on QQ.They say we
should spend more time with our family members and friends.【高分句型二】They also say we shouldn't believe in online friends.So they think that chatting online is a waste of time.(不支持和理由)I think we shouldn't spend much time chatting on QQ.We should do more readings and do more exercise.(我的建议)
【点评】首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心.注意文章文体、人称和时态.要求介绍.同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性.温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.
48.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 题目①
假如你是李华,你原计划本周日带你校交换生Peter去参观故宫博物院,但因故不能成行。请用英语给他写一封邮件,向他表示歉意,说明原因,并提出弥补的办法。 提示词语:sorry,hurt,next Sunday,ticket
提示问题:•Why can't you go to the Palace Museum with Peter? •What will you do to make up for it? Dear Peter,
Howe are you getting on?
Yours,
Li Hua 题目②
互助是一种美德。它有助于我们互相学习,共同进步。
某英文网站正在开展以\"互助\"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,讲述你与朋友互助的经历,以及你的感悟。
提示词语:be good at,notebook,talk,improve,friendship 提示问题:•How did you and your friend(s) help each other? •What did you learn from it?
Helping each other benefits both sides. 【分析】【高分句型一】
I'm sorry that I can't go to the Palace Museum with you this Sunday. 很抱歉,这个星期天我不能和你一起去故宫。表语从句 【高分句型二】
The doctor told me to rest for a week.
医生叫我休息一周。tell sb to do sth告诉某人做某事 【解答】Dear Peter,
Howe are you getting on?I'm sorry that I can't go to the Palace Museum with you this Sunday.
【高分句型一】 I hurt my foot in the football training yesterday. The doctor told me to rest for a week.【高分句型二】(原因)
If you still want to visit it with me,what about going next Sunday?(如何弥补)Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can book the tickets early.
Yours, Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
49.请你就\"什么是世界上最伟大的发明\"这个主题,发表一下看法,内容包括:1)按照你的观点,什么是世界上最伟大的发明?2)你为什么这么认为?3)你平时经常用 这个发明来做什么?(要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 60 词) 提示词语:opinion,invention, because, help,
提示问题: 1)In your opinion, what is the greatest invention in the world? 2)Why do you think so?
3)What do you often do with the invention? ______.
【分析】【高分句型一】
What's more, they can help solve problems and make students learn more.更重要的是,他们可以帮助解决问题,使学生学习更多.help do sth表示帮着做某事.
【高分句型二】
It is important for us to use computers properly.正确使用电脑对我们很重要.
it is important for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事很重要.
【解答】In your opinion, the computer is the greatest invention in the world.(最重要的发明是什么)They have changed the world and played an important role in our daily life. People can shop online if they don't want to go out.What's more, they can help solve problems and make students learn more. 【高分句型一】Students can watch English videos and learn spoken English.(原因)
It is important for us to use computers properly. 【高分句型二】I often use it to look up information. We should use it to study rather than play games.(我经常用它做什么)
That's all! Thank you!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
50.无锡地铁一号线将于2014年6月投入使用,这是无锡人民生活中的一件大事,对此许
多人发表了自己的看法.作为一名校英语报记者,请据此在答题卷指定的位置上写一篇80词左右的英文报道.内容提示如下:
1.乘坐地铁更快捷方便,安全性能更高,地铁票价不是很贵;
2.如果人们不开自备车而改乘地铁,可以缓解交通拥堵,减少大气和噪音污染,有利于环境保护;
3.地铁能为人们出行提供多一种选择; 4.你的看法.
要求:1.报道必须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯; 2.第4要点用2~3句展开合理想象,作适当发挥; 3.报道开头已在答题卷上给出,不计入总词数.
Wuxi Underground Line 1 will be in use in June,2014.Many people think
【分析】这是篇命题作文.题中给出了写作要点和要求.写作时,一定要按照要求注意要点的齐全.表述时句子要连贯,可使用一些连接性的句子和短语,增加文章的逻辑性. 高分句型:
①If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars,the road will be less crowded.如果人们坐地铁出行而不是开私家车,那么道路就不会那么拥挤了.句子中if引导一个条件状语从句,主句用的是一般将来时,从句用的是一般现在时,instead of而不是,of是个介词,后面跟动词的ing形式.
②it is good for protecting the environment.这有利于保护环境.句子中be good for对…有利,for是个介词,后面跟动词的ing形式.
【解答】Wuxi underground line 1 will be in use in June,2014.(引出话题.Some people think it's faster and easier to take the underground and it is much safer.One underground ticket is not very expensive.If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars,the road will be less crowded.(高分句型) And there will be less air and noise pollution,too.So,it is good for protecting the environment.(高分句型) Luckily,people will have one more choice to go to other places.(乘坐地铁的好处)I think underground is great.I will choose to go by underground and I hope more people will take underground.(我的看法)
【点评】这篇作文要点齐全,表述准确流利.文章使用了一些很有用的表达方式和句型,例如:If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars,the road will be less crowded.如果人们坐地铁出行而不是开私家车,那么道路就不会那么拥挤了.If引导条件状语从句;instead of而不是.So,it is good for protecting the environment.所以,这有利于保护环境.Be good for对…有利.
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