1个写作方法(重复否定法),4个段落(4句口诀),7个简单句式,11个写作角度,若干的推荐替换词汇 11个万能角度:
1.角度一:物质角度(吃穿住行)主题 has the ability to provide people with not only delicious/tasty food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as
comfortable
dwelling
and
handsome automobiles.
…有能力给人们提供不仅是美食和美
衣,还有舒适的住宿和实用的汽车。2. 角度二:时间角度
(Learning western culture) occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon.
…非常建设性利用好时间,从而让一个人感到满足,没有时间去无聊,从而帮助他们获得更广阔的视野。
浪费时间:waste the days, lavish the months and even squander the years
角度三: 效率角度
主题(Addiction to the Internet) makes people weary of other important things, discourages him to learn more, and finally they lose their interest in learning,
which
leads
to
their
underachievement.
主题(网瘾)会让人对重要的事情感到厌烦,让他不能学习更多地内容,最后对学习丧失兴趣,最终一事无成。
角度四:方便和快捷
主题(Wechat, QQ,MSN) can shrink the distance between cities and even continents,
smooth
the
communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people. ….会缩短城市甚至各大洲间的距离,使人们之间的交流变得畅通,从而消除人与人之间的障碍
角度五:安全角度
主题(高科技产品,high-advanced facilities) can shield (prevent) people from various kinds of hazards, ranging
from injury, robbery, assaults 攻击;伤害 to traffic accidents.
可以帮助人们免遭各种伤害,包括受伤,被盗或来自交通的伤害。
角度六:身心健康
It主题 cultivates an optimistic view toward the world, and extends people’s life expectancy span and improve the quality of living standards.它能让我们养成乐观的世界观,从而延长人们的寿命和提高生活的质量
角度七:生活娱乐
It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy, enthusiasm and charm. It adds a special means of entertainment to your seemingly tedious, routine and monotonous life. 它给我们提供了一系列休闲娱乐活动,帮助我们恢复精力,重获激情和增加魅力。它丰富了我们看起来那么无聊,一成不变的空洞的生活。
角度八:有助成长和成功
Through sth’s/somebody’s assistance, not only can they accumulate wealth, but will also establish the career, fit into society, and even attain social status.
通过某人/某事的帮助,他们不仅能积累财富,而且能奠定职业,融入社会,最终获得社会地位。
角度九:文化价值观
好:It will exert more positive influences
on
the
sustainable
development of Chinese culture.
它将对中国文化的可持续发展带来积极的影响。
坏:It will intensify conflicts and tensions between nations. It would put harmonious human relationship in danger. It would not promote mutual understanding, but would breach the friendly ties and widen the gap between people.
它将加剧民族间的矛盾和紧张态势。它将让人类和谐的关系陷入危险。它不能促进人们之间相互理解,反而破坏友谊的连接,加大加深误会。
内容:有话说;别离题形式:四段
表达:用词多样;用语多变写作推荐替换词汇:less common Aboutapproximately
Help sb. Dobenefit from doing sth. Try to doattempt to/endeavor to do.Showexhibit; demonstrate Givecontribute
Don’t/didn’t/doesn’tfail to/failure toCanhave the ability to do sth. Ifprovided that
Sothus, hence, therefore,
consequently, accordinglyA lot ofloads of
Importantsignificant; crucial Opinionperspective; standpointLonelysolitary
Hard-workingstudious; assiduous Difficultarduous; formidable Fragilevulnerable Alwaysinvariably Boringtedious
Dangeroushazardous Nowadayscurrently Puzzleperplex Famousdistinguished
范式: 竞争
首段
题眼:至少写2-3个分句状语(时代
的发展the development of the era;科技的进步the
progress
of the
science and technology;地球村的出现the emergence of the earth village;网络化的进步the widespread of the Internet;知识爆炸the explosion of the
knowledge;信息全球化the
globalization of the Information;经济一体化the integration of the economy;文化多元化With the diversity of the culture)the importance of competition;修饰主题词成分: 运用形容词,最好用定语从句来修饰名词
第一段:用时间背景来强调主题。
1.Life is cherished by everyone, but time by few.
2.Now, we are entering a brand new era, full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice. 3.直接进入主题
Currently, the issue of _题目/主题_ has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. 一段背景加题目
二段理论用否定三段举例论中心四段建议加举措
With the development of the times and the advancement of the science and technology, the competition between people/1 in various circles and industries/2 that grow fast/3 plays a crucial/vital/essential/significant role in our life/ that pushes us move forward. The competition, I think, is the only impetus to help us make a significant progress, by commenting on the famous remark, “survival of the
fittest.”
题释:题眼的核心词+插入语(I think, in
my
opinion,
from
of
my the
perspective)+the
survival
fittest+改写成句子
次段:理论论据: 至少写2-3点On the one hand, only through the competition, can the country make a great progress and can the individuals achieve advanced capabilities. It is the competition that enables us to realize the importance of making a good living.
提供参考的句型或句式:
1.主谓宾结构 I love you.
2.以v-ing为主语。Loving you is the happiest thing I’ve met.
3.以to do结构为主语To study with you is very happy. 4.以when引导的从句5.It is adj. for sb. To do sth. It is exciting to study with you. 6.强调句: It is+强调部分+that。。。7.倒装句:Only through…, can we… On the other hand, 否定重复式写作without the competition, I believe, people’s life will be lost in a puzzling
circumstance. Without the
competition, the animals won’t get evolved on the earth.
1.用自己的知识来解释题眼,为什么?
2.否定重复性写作!
分段:事实论据(举例)
If there were no competition主题, Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba Group, would
never
make
such
an
achievement in E-business world.
Nelson Manda, a giant and a great hero, tells us with his life story, that, the fortitude in the face of adversity and the perseverance on the pursuit of dreams, whenever, wherever and however, are the golden rules to the success.
末端:自己的做法或建议,至少2-3点
To maintain us competitive, we are demanded
to
obtain
fruitful
knowledge and experience. Skills, in my opinion, is also an element to make us competitive.
Through competition with others, we are expected to achieve greater cooperation and benefits. 末端建议范句:
1.It is high time that we took effective initiatives to address this urgent issue. 解决问题的迫切性2.It
is
imperative
that
the
corresponding laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this issue. 法律法规来解决3.倒装句结尾
Never in any era of our nation have
the stakes意图;目的;作用 of education been higher than now.
Of all changes witnessed by the past decades on our university campus, the fairly far-reaching影响广泛的 one maybe…六级作文:
内容:有话说,别离题 形式:四段
语言:用词多变;用语多样
范式:
第一段:题眼句
写出2-3以上的与题眼相关的大背景状语部分(介宾短语)(时代的进步the development of the times,科技的发展the advance of the science and technology,经济一体化/全球化economic integration/the globalization of the economy,文化多样性the diversity of the culture,地球村的出现the emergence of the earth village,知识爆炸the the
rapid
explosion development
of of
the the
knowledge,信息和网络的快速发展information and Internet),把题眼改
成一个句子,对句子中的名词进行修饰(形容词,介宾短语
who,when,where或定语从句);把题释改写成一句话,运用否定性进行写作。
With the development of the times and the advance of the science and technology,
the
fierce/drastic
competition between people/1 in various circles and industries/2/ plays a
crucial/vital/significant/dramatic/fabulous role in our bustling life, by commenting on the famous remark,
“survival of the fittest”. If there were no competition, the human being even the animals won’t make a good survival. +题释句
第二段:用理论论据来解释题眼.第一句话解释题眼,问自己到底为什么?(否定性写作+正反对比写作,强调句+介词开头)
过渡句:Now I would like to state the points of the importance of the competition. On the one hand, it is the fierce competition that promotes the progress of human being. Only through
the competition, the society will move forward. On the other hand, without the competition, we will lose the positive power to achieve our ambitious goals that are hard to seek for.
第三段:用事实论据来解释题眼Now, I prefer to give you an example to illustrate the importance of the competition.
If there
were
no
competition, Jack Ma, the founder of the Alibaba Group, would never make a good survival in e-business world.
The passion of reading
Zhu Ziqing, one of the greatest writers, if there is no passion in his reading, would never write so many fabulous works for Chinese.
The harms of misleading information on Internet 虚构例子
One of my friends, who is interested in surfing on Internet, was cheated and lost thousands Yuan by the misleading information on Internet. In the opposite side,
第四段:写与题眼相关的看法、建议或做法。
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