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例题分析

Mr. Jones introduced Lin some school rules on the first day when Lin arrived the new school in New York. Lin found quite a few differences about Dos and Don’ts between Chinese school rules and American school rules.

在纽约新学校上学的第一天，Jones先生给Lin介绍了学校的一些校规。Lin在日记里描述了一些中美学校校规的对比，并记叙了他/她的感受。假设你是Lin，写一篇不少于60个字的日记。 Suppose you were Lin, write at least 60 words to describe the differences between the Chinese school rules and the American school rules and how you felt about the differences in the diary. (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．Here are the school rules introduced to Lin: School Rules Always call your teacher with Mr. or Ms. Don’t be late for your class. Raise your hand when asking a question. Be an active thinker in the classroom. Do your homework on your own. No cheating in exams. Ask your teachers for help if you have difficulty in learning. They will be glad to help you out. Remember to wear your uniform. to school every day and keep your uniform clean and tidy. Use kind words when you talk with others and learn to share and take turns when you work and play. __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ 【写作思路】

1.审题：本篇作文要求写一篇日记，要求：①对比中美学校校规； ②谈感受

2. 列要点 美国学校校规分析 The American students really behaved as an active thinker. They are encouraged to hold different opinions, came up with different ideas with the teachers and their 中国学校校规分析 The Chinese schools, however, didn’t allow students to express opinions unless their teachers give them chance. Students are required to obey many strict school rules 1 / 3

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classmates, and think positively even if they gave and classroom rules. the wrong answers. Most of students are not good at active thinking, which limits their development of abilities to deal with difficulty. 我的感受：We must learn from the American schools to make the Chinese students become the real master of the class

3. 加开头结尾 开头： 结尾：

4. 连：使文章连贯

5. 美：好词好句

【参考范文】

The first day at school shocked me a great deal, which was an opportunity for me to know about the differences between the American and the Chinese school rules. What impressed me most was that the American students really behaved as an active thinker. They are encouraged to hold different opinions, came up with different ideas with the teachers and their classmates, and think positively even if they gave the wrong answers. The Chinese schools, however, didn’t allow students to express opinions unless their teachers give them chance. Students are required to obey many strict school rules and classroom rules. Most of students are not good at active thinking, which limits their development of abilities to dealing with difficulty. Therefore, we must learn from the American schools to make the Chinese students become the real master of the class!

课后作业

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Mother’s Day” according to the information given below. (根据以下内容，以“母亲节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

内容提示：去年5月11日母亲节那天，你为你的母亲做了许多有意义的事。请根据表格提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文。可以适当加入细节，展开想象。 上午 下午 晚上 给母亲买了一些鲜花，放在花瓶内 送母亲自己做的贺卡，母亲非常感动 为母亲做了一顿晚餐 __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________

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__________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________

__________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ __________ 【参考范文】

Last year, I did many meaningful things for my mother. It was May 11th, Mother’s Day. I got up very early in the morning in order to buy some pink carnations, which are my mother’s favourite. After coming back, I put them into a beautiful vase carefully and they looked so matched. Then I made a lovely card, writing down the words that I wanted to say to my mother. In the afternoon, Mum came home and saw the flowers and cards as well. While reading what I had written down on the card, she was deeply moved. What surprised her most was when I told her I would make a big supper for her, she could hardly believe what she had heard. That was the most unforgettable day for both my mother and me. What I do for my mother brings happiness to both of us.

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